Hang around ill have it done asap.oaktown wrote:alright, for the last time clean up your grammar and I may give this my stamp.
• are you going to capitalize "Landing Point" or aren't you? you have "Landing Points" and "landing points" and even "landing Points" !!!!
• "bombard any other territory within their colony" - elsewhere you call it an empire, so I'd change colony to empire.
• "Only ports on the same ocean" etc... drop "only." Because neighboring territories can attack them as well.
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What do you know about map making, bitch?
Top Score:2403natty_dread wrote:I was wrong
"landing Point" in the text on the right. this is the one that bothered me the most! 
And you could drop "All" - it doesn't add anything. Less is more.
If you aren't going to capitalize landing point in the legend, it might look more consistent not to cap' "Homeland."
Anyway, since i know you're going to work it out (and since you guys could just stamp this map yourselves if you wanted to)...

And you could drop "All" - it doesn't add anything. Less is more.
If you aren't going to capitalize landing point in the legend, it might look more consistent not to cap' "Homeland."
Anyway, since i know you're going to work it out (and since you guys could just stamp this map yourselves if you wanted to)...

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yipee, i know i would miss one oaktown, to busy with the busy foundry tonightoaktown wrote:"landing Point" in the text on the right. this is the one that bothered me the most!
And you could drop "All" - it doesn't add anything. Less is more.
If you aren't going to capitalize landing point in the legend, it might look more consistent not to cap' "Homeland."
Anyway, since i know you're going to work it out (and since you guys could just stamp this map yourselves if you wanted to)...
What do you know about map making, bitch?
Top Score:2403natty_dread wrote:I was wrong
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This, I believe, belongs on Mine and mibi's map.AndyDufresne wrote:---The New World Map has reached the ‘Final Forge’ Stage. I've revived this thread from the pits of the Foundry Furnace (okay, maybe not) and have examined the contents. Nearly every major concern has been addressed. If there are any other current concerns, please make your voice heard. If after a reasonable amount of time there has not been any objection or protest, the map will be deemed finished with the 'Foundry Brand' of approval and will be submitted for live play. As long as there is still discussion or posts that have yet to be commented on, the map will remain in Final Forge until said discussion has reached the conclusion that the map has reached its final and polished version.
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WidowMakers wrote:This, I believe, belongs on Mine and mibi's map.AndyDufresne wrote:---The New World Map has reached the ‘Final Forge’ Stage. I've revived this thread from the pits of the Foundry Furnace (okay, maybe not) and have examined the contents. Nearly every major concern has been addressed. If there are any other current concerns, please make your voice heard. If after a reasonable amount of time there has not been any objection or protest, the map will be deemed finished with the 'Foundry Brand' of approval and will be submitted for live play. As long as there is still discussion or posts that have yet to be commented on, the map will remain in Final Forge until said discussion has reached the conclusion that the map has reached its final and polished version.
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evil monkey abusing mod powers to edit without traceAndyDufresne wrote:What are you talking about?
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andy wrote Arms race instead of new world and now he edited.gimil wrote:What are you talking aboutDiM wrote:evil monkey abusing mod powers to edit without traceAndyDufresne wrote:What are you talking about?
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qwert wrote:Do i see good,these map is start 2 januar 2008,and after 36 days in development reach Final Forge![]()
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