Mr Benn,
Being a Postman and a life-long Englishman from the City and County of Bristol (erm... not represented here), I would like to commend you on your excellent map. I have a few issues/suggestions however;
1. Middlesex should be shortened to
Middx (not Midx)
2. The bonus system is hard to understand - could it not be simplified to a straight "hold the region - get the bonus"?
3. London absolutely
has to have a major presence on a map of England. Here is a link to a map of England's Regions...
http://www.picturesofengland.com/mapofengland/regions.html... as you can see London is massive (not a little dot) and maybe should replace Middlesex as a territory on your map.
4. If it was represented I think it should start as a neutral and be given a +1 bonus for holding it (or maybe +1 auto deploy)
5. Gloucestershire could be shortened to Glos or Glous
6. The tail of Gloucestershire where it borders Somerset could be cut off and changed to Bristol.
7. Isle of Wight needs to have a line connecting it to Hampshire (for clarity)
8. The three lions are great and the water effect is magnificent.
Keep up the good work and I hope the above helps.
TC.