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The Adventures of Farny the Elf and his Pals Ch. 1: Servants

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:09 pm
by frodobaggins994
I am starting a story. Every week, I will write a chapter and every1 can talk about it (I will start a new thread for each chapter) then there will be a poll about what should happen next and that thing with the most votes will happen in the next chapter.

So here's chapter 1:Servants

Deep in the forest of the Deragleton, there was an Elf Realm called Elfopolis. There was a young Elf named Farny. He had some pals named Trincilian, and his brother Corac. All three played together all the time. On time, Farny and his Pals were playing a game when the King came to them and asked them to be his servants. Now normally, no one would ever want to be a servant, but here in the Elfopolis, it was an honor. they accepted the offer and were taken into the palace and were taught how to work. They soon became very skilled each at his own job. Farny was the baker, Trincilian became a Blacksmith and was constantly repairing the king's armour, and Corac was the Judge. Although they were very skilled, things start going bad soon.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 2:53 am
by Cynthia
I voted for the baker ;) I make mistakes in the kitchen all the time! :roll:

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:13 am
by frodobaggins994
makes sense

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:15 am
by Cynthia
Hey - I'm the only one for the baker! 1 vote! :shock:

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:20 am
by MeDeFe
The judge, he can screw up the worst.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 2:01 pm
by Stopper
The blacksmith. He has the potential for the goriest & most stomach-churning mistake, what with all them hammers and the hot forge and whatnot.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:57 pm
by frodobaggins994
not too likely

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 10:02 pm
by DIRESTRAITS
Stopper wrote:The blacksmith. He has the potential for the goriest & most stomach-churning mistake, what with all them hammers and the hot forge and whatnot.


agreed

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 8:37 am
by The1exile
DIRESTRAITS wrote:
Stopper wrote:The blacksmith. He has the potential for the goriest & most stomach-churning mistake, what with all them hammers and the hot forge and whatnot.


agreed


I also agree.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:00 pm
by frodobaggins994
yer right but i'm not going to make it too gory

PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 7:29 am
by MeDeFe
Why not? It can't be worse than what we get in the news.

PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 6:07 pm
by frodobaggins994
lol

PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 9:07 pm
by samwise44
FARNY IS A FAIRY!!!!!

PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 9:08 pm
by frodobaggins994
no he's not!!!!!!!!!1

PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 9:11 pm
by Ham
the judge

PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:53 pm
by frodobaggins994
why does ever1 want the judge?

PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 6:26 pm
by s.xkitten
because judges make mistakes all the time, and out of the choices, it is in the highest power position

PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 6:58 pm
by Stopper
That's as may be, what about the goriness factor?!? What mistake can a judge make that would be gory? Accidentally hit his own thumb with his hammer? Come ON, people!

The blacksmith, dying in a wave of his own smelted iron, every time! Yeah!

PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:44 pm
by frodobaggins994
c'mon guys, it wont be too gory.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:16 pm
by frodobaggins994
just so u know, im post next chapter tom.