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Largest Margin of Victory (Win %):
1. SC (37) v KRB (4) - 90.2%
2. Sky Force (18) v Water's Fury (2) - 90%
3. TOFU (36) v SoH (5) - 87.8%
4. KNT (36) v LI (5) - 87.8%
5. THOTA (35) v DBC (5) - 87.5%
JPlo64 wrote:Terrific job Icepack
Really fun read!
I do have 1 error to point out:Largest Margin of Victory (Win %):
1. SC (37) v KRB (4) - 90.2%
2. Sky Force (18) v Water's Fury (2) - 90%
3. TOFU (36) v SoH (5) - 87.8%
4. KNT (36) v LI (5) - 87.8%
5. THOTA (35) v DBC (5) - 87.5%
Missing FOED's win over LOTZ from just a few months ago that should be tied for #1 on this list!
http://www.conquerclub.com/public.php?m ... WarId=2305
FOED (37) v LOTZ (4) - 90.2%
iAmCaffeine wrote:Whilst currently reading I can see an axolotl, rhino, platypus and mink. Not sure which I am. You're forward here was quite deep and something I can relate to very well. I both like and appreciate the extra effort you've put into this to give it a more formal feel.
The rhino just left.
From a design point of view, can you use bold instead of caps if you're gonna highlight something in the text? Pages 5-6 got a bit confusing with the layout. Also, the tables and graphs for the F400 are very hard to read and have no external link to view a bigger version, if something could be done to improve that it would be helpful. I have absolutely no idea which colour ATN is on the graphs for the F400. I can see the orange on the F41 but I don't really care about that.
Again, on Pages 13-15 the layout is weird; I've never seen any kind of magazine or newspaper format stories in that way. I don't want to scroll through three pages to read one story and then scroll back up to read the rest.
As always I didn't read everything, but you did a good job here mate.
IcePack wrote:iAmCaffeine wrote:Whilst currently reading I can see an axolotl, rhino, platypus and mink. Not sure which I am. You're forward here was quite deep and something I can relate to very well. I both like and appreciate the extra effort you've put into this to give it a more formal feel.
The rhino just left.
From a design point of view, can you use bold instead of caps if you're gonna highlight something in the text? Pages 5-6 got a bit confusing with the layout. Also, the tables and graphs for the F400 are very hard to read and have no external link to view a bigger version, if something could be done to improve that it would be helpful. I have absolutely no idea which colour ATN is on the graphs for the F400. I can see the orange on the F41 but I don't really care about that.
Again, on Pages 13-15 the layout is weird; I've never seen any kind of magazine or newspaper format stories in that way. I don't want to scroll through three pages to read one story and then scroll back up to read the rest.
As always I didn't read everything, but you did a good job here mate.
Thank you for the great feedback, Caff!
I checked out Pages 5-6, I'm not sure were you are refering to about bold instead of caps (or was that two, seperate comments?).
If you can provide an example, I'll try to make it happen.
I know I got some feedback late in the game (this morning) regarding some of the layouts, this first go around I focused mainly on size of the articles, and getting them to end approximately at the appropriate location so that each section fit nicely and eliminated the most white space / having sections look normal. However, I can see your point regarding having to scroll 3 pages to read one article. Initially, my thought was for a newspaper (its been awhile, but I used to read them often) would often have an introduction on the first page (or whatever, first page of the section) and often have a italicised caption "go to page 4 for the rest of this article" type thing, so I wasn't sure that it would be a big deal. But thats page flipping, as opposed to scrolling and I agree I can try to make it more convenient. A little bit of a learning curve with the new format, and google docs. Hoping I can figure out the table of contents feature and link to the next piece or something...
Regarding F400, yeah that was the biggest struggle area for me personally. Trying to provide information, and the graphs was very difficult. Making them bigger obviously made it more legible at the cost of adding quite a few pages. However linking them was not something I considered, great suggestion for future implimentation. Thanks
IcePack wrote:Im just doing some play testing of my own.
josko.ri wrote:Congrats IcePack for all your effot put into the newslettr and the clan world. The platoon report was indeed very much fun to read.
IcePack wrote:
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