by oaktown on Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:25 am
alright, this has been a long time coming from me, so it may be long... maybe I'm forgetting some things, and maybe these things have already been said, but here it is anyway.
ā¢ You have done a really good job with the army circle placements. They are close, but there are only a few numbers that I think might bump into each other when using color codes or on really large numbers. Maybe you could drop the E3 circle so the E2 number isn't parallel. N6 could drop a bit also. And N5 is close to two circles, and could mean misdeployments.
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If you want to agree with me,that i left these for now,and when i start with XMl,will much easy move army circle in better area.
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ā¢ "WTF" is a territory - LOL!
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What is problem with that?WTF is shortcut for Western Task Force.
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ā¢ Central front - I agree with the above posters that there may be a better way to describe this area. A "front" is a linear region along which fighting occurs - if you're going to show the eastern and western "fronts" on this map, you should call the interior something else... like "Interior." You could also call it the "Axis Powers," "Central Europe," or just "Central Zone."
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I dont get that,i dont understand why people dont want to listen what i wrote several times,and still dont come in people brain. Central Front exist in Allied plans,but not become operative because German Colaps.How many time i must repeat these.Nobody call some front with Zones.Zone is not word for area where people fight in large terittory.
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Note also that by drawing those lines and calling them the western and eastern fronts you are assuming a German point of view... to the Russians, the "Eastern Front" was just the "Front." (Much like how in China, "Chinese food" is simply called "food".)
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I write in English and i know that english call these Eastern Front,in Russian is ŠŠµŠ»ŠøŠŗŠ°Ń ŠŃŠµŃŠµŃŃŠ²ŠµŠ½Š½Š°Ń Š²Š¾Š¹Š½Š°(these mean Great Patriotic War,or in Serbian ŠŠµŠ»ŠøŠŗŠø ŠŃŠ°ŃŠ±ŠøŠ½ŃŠŗŠø ŃŠ°Ń)
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ā¢ On a related note, take a look at the Balkan Front - a conglomeration of eight territories doesn't seem to make a single front. Maybe just call that region the "balkans" ?
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Well probably you right-i will change these in Balkan,also i will change Polish front to Poland.
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ā¢ Other than the fact that it is the end of your other two maps, do the impassable front lines actually represent anything? Becaause I'm not sure that there was a time in which the Germans held Poland and the Balkans, but didn't hold Kƶln and the rest of Western Germany.
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When i create Western and eastern front,i try to represent very good area who cover these war fronts.Western front area is cover max advance of Western Allies.From other side Rusian call Eastern front all area where they fight(including Berlin),also they capture Vienna and Prague.But these not be possible to create and i create Eastern Front from view of Germans,and these is line where German start hes Barbarosa operation. I hope that these is more clear for you,but i these explane all ready in related topic(western Front map-Eastern front map)unfortunatly people forget that,and i must repeat these many times more.
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The bonus indicators are poorly placed in the legend. The numbers look like ther go with the names to their right, not their left. For example, it took me a minute to figure out why there was no star where Berlin should be, because the legend makes it look like the star indicates Berlin.
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I dont see any problem with that,because when you look Western front you will not tell"hey these country not have bonus".These is taken from Western and eastern front legend,and i belive that its not comlicated for people.Stars-Yellow stars present Allied(american use yellow stars)-Red stars present Russian army,and Iron Cross present German army and berlin(these is logical)
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The inset map may be the best way to explain the tight area, but I really don't like that this seems to be the new way around representing tight spaces... this is your second consecutive map that had to make use of the inset. I personally think it is clumsy to look back and forth to see S6 and W1 when they are adjoining, but like I said it's probably the best way to make this map work. What would help is if you could represent some of the numbers twice - I would like to see the "F" and "W" army counts shown on the mini-map AND on the regular map. Is this possible? Yeti?
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You mean two circle with diferent coordinates who represent one Army number? I think that these is not possible.
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ā¢ I think you need the territory names in the inset map.
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Well some names can stay but Ardennes is not possible to put,even in main map ardennes fit somehow,In large image these will be possible(i hope so)
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You have two sets of stars, which could be confusing... maybe in the legend you could say "Hold any three western stars" and "Hold all Russian stars."
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Well these is issue for Player IQ-i think that people with normal IQ Will very quick understand that in legend you have two diferent stars and that "Hold any three start"belong to Western Front,that "hold three start"belong to Eastern Front.Ofcourse people who all ready play Western or eastern Front will be in advantage and much faster will connect what is what.
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ā¢ There's a lot going on around VL1, and the army count isn't even there yet - maybe lose the submarine or whatever that graphic is?
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I dont see that these can couse some problems,even when numbers come,then you will not see all sumbarine.I can not imagine that someon will tell"hey why i can attack submarine".
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ā¢ In some places rivers are crossable with arrows, while in other places the rivers just seem to disappear... for instance, the two rivers shown near VL5 are two rivers, or one? And if it's one, why is it crossable with arrows at VL3? Inconsistent.
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Are you whas in sleep mode when i create Eastern Front?
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ā¢ I haven't looked at all of the bonuses closely, but the one that jumps out at me is Eastern Germany: with the berlin bonus, it's a +3 for four territories with two borders. Your other +3 regions are considerably larger/harder to hold, eg. N.Italy with 6 territories and 3 borders.
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I dont know what to say on that,i give people to decide how many East Germany need to worth,so far 3 is good,maybe you can give more info abouth that?
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And a graphics concern: some of the graphic elements don't look so good now that they've been shrunk. The rockets look off, and the defenses in the western part of the map just look like little bumps - could be mountains, could be bumkers, could be gumdrops.
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What you expect,to be perfect map who is in begining been in 850px dimension and then whas shrink to 630px.That why i create Inset for Sigfried defence to help.
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Whew! Keep up the good work qwert - I think you've done a wonderful job making this fit.
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Thanks i hope that you satisfy with mine answers.