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oaktown wrote:I never much liked the colors of the compass or the flag (mentioned it using a completely different color palette weeks ago) but my more immediate color concern is that the regions just became hard to distinguish again... just as we had made a breakthough!
Bonuses look better. Sort out the color and I'll stamp it.
oaktown wrote:I vote lighter yellow option.![]()
clear up the final bonus stuff and you're good to go as far as I can tell. I'd say that the -1 for dead zone is fine, especially if it can start neutral - I hate starting a game with a neg. Making it no bonus is also fine.
oaktown wrote:Okey dokey!
This is minor, but the dead zone line might sound better if just said
"Dead Zone: no bonus"
The border south of the dead zone looks different than the rest, but that's for Gimil to approve!
natty_dread wrote:I was wrong
gimil wrote:Could you perhaps move your signature to the top left of the page and change the font slightly? Just so it doesnt look part of the legendsAlso rather than center aligning the legends text, could you perhaps left align it with bullet points? Should make it a little easier to read and understand.
Apart form that I think im happy I will stamp it after about a day if no major cocerns come up
gimil wrote:Could you perhaps move your signature to the top left of the page and change the font slightly? Just so it doesnt look part of the legendsAlso rather than center aligning the legends text, could you perhaps left align it with bullet points? Should make it a little easier to read and understand.
Apart form that I think im happy I will stamp it after about a day if no major cocerns come up
laci_mae wrote:I'm really looking forward to playing this map. And, I hope I'm not stepping on any toes this late in development.
That said, I was wondering about the plus signs in the legend. On the small map, it is somewhat hard to determine whether they are all plus signs. They are slightly blurry and could be interpreted as negatives. I see, on the large map, that they are all indeed additions for holding said bonuses. You might consider removing these all together because they don't really serve a purpose, yet could potentially be confusing.
Best,
Laci
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