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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby tlane on Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:04 pm

sailorseal wrote:
tlane wrote:
LED ZEPPELINER wrote:
The Neon Peon wrote:Fixing the right wing on the planes seems like something which would have been easier to do before you put it on the map, but it still needs to be done.

i have decided to get rid of the airplanes


There airplanes are a good idea!
What are you going to replace them with?

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highway


o.k.
but make sure it is clear and looks good

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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby gimil on Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:39 pm

I have to main concerns just now guys.

1. The big, ugly, thick black line to the west of the map. Is there any real need for it? I think you can agree it isn't! I would say remove it and give that bit the same borders as everywhere else.

2. The boats. At the moment the boats don't seem to quite fit with the look of the rest of your map. There are untidy and blurry. I would advise new boats are in order.

Nice looking map you guys have going here. Keep it up!
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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby Kaplowitz on Sun Mar 08, 2009 4:59 pm

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Maybe you should take out some of those boats up north, and put islands in?

Also, are you sure Cedarhurst is the best name for that place? I think maybe you should change it to Rockville Centre. Or maybe you should change it to Hempstead, and make the current Hempstead like Roslyn or Manhasset or something...
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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:38 pm

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Maybe you should take out some of those boats up north, and put islands in?

Also, are you sure Cedarhurst is the best name for that place? I think maybe you should change it to Rockville Centre. Or maybe you should change it to Hempstead, and make the current Hempstead like Roslyn or Manhasset or something...

the islands are a good idea, maybe just have islands, and A few ports on Connecticus or wherever in the long island sound area and then boats in the atlantic area
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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby Premier2k on Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:26 am

Getting better but why the thick black line to the west? :o Awful....get rid of it....

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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:55 am

Premier2k wrote:Getting better but why the thick black line to the west? :o Awful....get rid of it....

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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby sailorseal on Sat Mar 14, 2009 12:33 pm

So what do we all think of a highway?
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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby keiths31 on Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:29 am

I like the look of the map as well. But is there really a need for the boats or even a highway? Is there anything wrong with having maybe a "ferry route" on each side of the island? With no boats you have a pretty good "mini map". The boats really clutter up the map and seem too large for the map.
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Re: [D]Long Island v4 pgs 1 & 7

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:32 am

keiths31 wrote:I like the look of the map as well. But is there really a need for the boats or even a highway? Is there anything wrong with having maybe a "ferry route" on each side of the island? With no boats you have a pretty good "mini map". The boats really clutter up the map and seem too large for the map.

duly noted, i will try to come up with a newer version without the boats :D
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Thu Mar 19, 2009 8:59 am

ok, i tried it without the boats, and i made everthing look a little crisper
v5
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changes:
1. got rid of boats
2. new attack routes
3. changed look of unplayable area
4. got rid of army circles
5. redid borders with 1px brush
6. added numbers
9. minor graphic tweaks

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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby keiths31 on Thu Mar 19, 2009 5:34 pm

I like it better with no boats.
Are the ferry routs actual ferry routs or just random ones you made up?
The dark lines by the word "Atlantic" look out of place. What are they supposed to be? Or is it a graphic error?
No army circles looks sharp.
Is there a bridge or ferry that connect Long Beach and Jones Beach in real life?
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Thu Mar 19, 2009 5:41 pm

keiths31 wrote:I like it better with no boats.
ok
Are the ferry routs actual ferry routs or just random ones you made up?
i made them up
The dark lines by the word "Atlantic" look out of place. What are they supposed to be? Or is it a graphic error?
its from the grunge layer i used
No army circles looks sharp.
i thought so too
Is there a bridge or ferry that connect Long Beach and Jones Beach in real life?
i am not sure
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby keiths31 on Thu Mar 19, 2009 6:01 pm

A quick look on answers.com shows that Long Beach and Jones Beach do connect via a bridge. You should have them connect in the map.
Also it says that Jones Beach and Fire Island are not joined, but are separated.
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Thu Mar 19, 2009 6:07 pm

keiths31 wrote:A quick look on answers.com shows that Long Beach and Jones Beach do connect via a bridge. You should have them connect in the map.
Also it says that Jones Beach and Fire Island are not joined, but are separated.

ok, thank you for the insigt, i will change it
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby the.killing.44 on Thu Mar 19, 2009 6:13 pm

keiths31 wrote:A quick look on answers.com shows that Long Beach and Jones Beach do connect via a bridge. You should have them connect in the map.
Also it says that Jones Beach and Fire Island are not joined, but are separated.

yes he's right, but the one b/w Fire Island ‹—› Bay Shore is real.

and, dead space much?

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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:37 pm

i don't know what i should do to get rid of the empty space, what deos everybody think of it without the boats, i think it looks better...
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby sailorseal on Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:56 pm

Glad to see support for the new version thanks everyone :D
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby keiths31 on Fri Mar 20, 2009 3:14 pm

LED ZEPPELINER wrote:i don't know what i should do to get rid of the empty space, what deos everybody think of it without the boats, i think it looks better...


As stated I think it looks better and the gameplay will be better without the boats. Do a bit of research to see what islands actually connect (Like Long Beach and Jones Beach) and what actual ferry routes are.
As for the empty space...you could put the coat of arms from flag in there
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Flag_of_New_York.svg
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby Corum1234567 on Sat Mar 21, 2009 6:49 am

Bayshore and Islip are backwards
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby Corum1234567 on Sat Mar 21, 2009 6:51 am

Sw Brookhaven should be The Mastic's SE "The Quogue's"
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Re: [D]Long Island v5 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:15 am

ok, i'll try and fix all of this soon

(edit:) i have also started the small map, so I will try to have that up in the next update
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Re: [D]Long Island v6 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:47 am

ok, so here is the small version with the large, i added a light house to try and take up some of the empty space
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v6 small
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changes:
    1. added light house
    2. no connection: fire island <-> jones beach
    3. added bridge between long beach and jones beach
    4. switched islip and bay shore
    5. made small map
    6. added numbers to small
    9. minor graphic tweaks
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Re: [D]Long Island v6 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby keiths31 on Sat Mar 21, 2009 3:26 pm

The lighthouse is a good idea...and maybe a good idea for different attack routs.
There is a lighthouse in the following communities in Long Island
Long Island Sound Side
- Hempstead
- Huntington
- Southhold
Atlantic Ocean Side
- Islip
- SE Brookhaven
- East Hampton

You could put lighthouses on these terts and all the light houses on each side can attack each other. This would negate the need for made up ferry routes. Just a thought...
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Re: [D]Long Island v6 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Sat Mar 21, 2009 3:32 pm

this could be cool, but instead of dividing it by ocean, maybe i could just say all light houses can attack each other
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Re: [D]Long Island v6 pgs 1 & 9 [no boats]

Postby keiths31 on Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:07 pm

LED ZEPPELINER wrote:this could be cool, but instead of dividing it by ocean, maybe i could just say all light houses can attack each other


You could...but I would tend to lean towards just one side of the island being able to attack the other. Opening it up too much would make it very hard to defend the lighthouse terts. But it is your map...just my thoughts ;)
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