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I will add to your map some flare and spice! (Who's next?)

PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:15 pm
by mibi
So in my desire to procrastinate from my regular design gigs, I am offering my services for free.

Here is how it works. If you want your map 'spiced up' or 'zinged with flare' or tweaked by myself, just post the image here. If I think I can help, then you can pm a link to the PSD (sorry no gimps). Then I will make a few small changes that I think would make the map look a bit better. Of course you don't have to accept or like my suggestions, no worries.

I am hoping for Foundry proper or final forge maps. Give it a shot, could be fun.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:25 am
by mibi
Ok, here is the first victim.

The greenland map.

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and After
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I thought this map was already pretty solid, design wise.

Changes:

1. Darkened the sea using a radial gradient
2. Redid the title using Verdana with a icey/frozen treatment.
3. Moved the bear up a big and put the phrase on 3 lines.
4. Removed the glow from the dotted routes and the entire land mass.

I thought everything else didn't need any refinement, nice work k.44!

k.44, feel free to use any or none of the changes.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:32 am
by porkenbeans
Nice job, You have a good eye mibi, and do indeed know how to sprinkle the spice. 8-)
Every one of your changes, albeit suttle, has given this map more depth, color, and clarity.

44. is not my favorite person, but he does have some talent. I like his map. So, I will offer a helpful suggestion. Make the bonus legion smaller, and trade places with it and the bear.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:34 am
by RjBeals
I love what mibi has done - I think you should incorporate all of it. This map looks great! What about verdana for the territory font as well, with a little iciness to it also?

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:35 am
by yeti_c
I think the gradient should run south to north - after all - the sea/ocean gets colder the further north...

Of course this will ruin the new look of the title which I love with the dark outline.

C.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 1:22 pm
by MrBenn
Discussion about the Greenland Map should probably be contained within the map development thread.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 4:55 pm
by mibi
MrBenn wrote:Discussion about the Greenland Map should probably be contained within the map development thread.



We are just discussing the changes I have made. I am sure k.44 will be posting any updates to the map in his thread.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:11 pm
by Qwert
by MrBenn » Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:22 pm

Discussion about the Greenland Map should probably be contained within the map development thread.

In some other cases, MOd will move these to related map topic,but these is mibi, and maybe mod will not do that.
If someon have sugestion abouth some map,then its normal to post in ,in these case Grenland topic, what is purpose to open topic here?

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:43 pm
by the.killing.44
wow, thanks a ton mibi. i think i'll keep all of those changes!

.44

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:12 pm
by MrBenn
qwert wrote:
by MrBenn » Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:22 pm

Discussion about the Greenland Map should probably be contained within the map development thread.

In some other cases, MOd will move these to related map topic,but these is mibi, and maybe mod will not do that.
If someon have sugestion abouth some map,then its normal to post in ,in these case Grenland topic, what is purpose to open topic here?

The purpose of this topic is mibi's offer of help as set out in his opening post.

Please keep this thread to discussion/requests for mibi-help, or I may need to bring out the padlock ;-)

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:22 pm
by john9blue
I'll bite.

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Have any ideas for this map? ;)

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:56 pm
by mibi
john9blue wrote:I'll bite.



Have any ideas for this map? ;)


sure, send me the psd in a pm. don't expect any quick turn around though, kinda loaded the rest of the week.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:57 pm
by LED ZEPPELINER
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this too if you have time

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:06 pm
by mibi
LED ZEPPELINER wrote:this too if you have time


gotta send me the psd.

Love that font though. I used to use Aquillne all the time, classy.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 1:53 pm
by mibi
Another victim, Chess.


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After

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Changes:

Basically, I wanted to bring more realism to the map, using an actual board, some shadows, nice wood and rich and warm colors. Keeping all the colors in the CMYK gamut. White became off-ivory, etc. Some of the peices may be off center, i never touched those. I also changed the text line spacing a bit. I think this feels more like a methodical game of chess than the previous version which was pretty good, but had too many overt filters, glows, and bevels.

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:08 pm
by the.killing.44
Oo-la-la.

.44

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice? (Chess)

PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 3:04 pm
by john9blue
Pretty snazzy, mibi. I'll run a poll in the thread to see what people prefer. Thanks very much! :)

Re: I will add to your map pieces of flare and spice, yes?

PostPosted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 10:54 pm
by mibi
I like this map as is, so I don't think there is any real need to flare it out.

nice work.

LED ZEPPELINER wrote:
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this too if you have time

Re: I will add to your map some flare and spice! (Who's next?)

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:11 am
by a.sub
This seems like fun, and i like to learn how i can improve
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ill PM you the .psd asap

Re: I will add to your map some flare and spice! (Who's next?)

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 2:27 am
by MrBenn
mibi wrote:I am hoping for Foundry proper or final forge maps. Give it a shot, could be fun.

Re: I will add to your map some flare and spice! (Who's next?)

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:20 am
by a.sub
MrBenn wrote:
mibi wrote:I am hoping for Foundry proper or final forge maps. Give it a shot, could be fun.

awwww :(
k fine

Re: I will add to your map some flare and spice! (Who's next?)

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 3:17 pm
by tlane
MrBenn wrote:
mibi wrote:I am hoping for Foundry proper or final forge maps. Give it a shot, could be fun.

so does this mean that maps in the drafting room should not be given to mibi?

Re: I will add to your map some flare and spice! (Who's next?)

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 3:23 pm
by MrBenn
I'm not the mouthpiece of mibi, but I would imagine that he would rather look at maps that have a good likelihood of making it to the quench zone, which is why he specifically mentioned Main Foundry / Final Forge maps?

Re: I will add to your map some flare and spice! (Who's next?)

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 3:28 pm
by sailorseal
MrBenn wrote:I'm not the mouthpiece of mibi, but I would imagine that he would rather look at maps that have a good likelihood of making it to the quench zone, which is why he specifically mentioned Main Foundry / Final Forge maps?

Just to elaborate on Benn, I don't have a percentage but a large % of maps in the drafting room end up dying in ideas or in the bin so I would press Mibi not to do these maps do to this being a "spice up" and for maps nearing the end, not right at the beginning
(Just wanted to elaborate on Benn and add my opinion in case Mibi was planning on doing it for these maps)

Re: I will add to your map some flare and spice! (Who's next?)

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 3:29 pm
by tlane
MrBenn wrote:I'm not the mouthpiece of mibi, but I would imagine that he would rather look at maps that have a good likelihood of making it to the quench zone, which is why he specifically mentioned Main Foundry / Final Forge maps?


That makes sence